Alchemist

Honestly, the Future Sights should've hit and taken out Rhyperior. Having Gary constantly win without even losing a single Pokémon is getting pretty boring.

Looks like you skipped a chapter or two...

Thanks for the warning, this kind of story definitely isn't for me then.

I'm really not a fan of the MC being able to gain more Kekkei Genkai from his System, so I'll stop reading here.

How is the MC doing so much worse than canon Kakashi? This is just embarrassing.

Since the Jutsu creates a wall, the Jutsu should probably be something like Water Formation Wall. Water Severing Wave is the technique Tobirama uses to spit out a beam of water like a pressure cutter.

And just like that my interest rapidly fades. Based on the fic's summary, I was looking forward to the MC only having Blue Silver Grass as a Martial Soul and using his cheat to enhance it, only for him to immediately gain two more martial souls. Having twin martial souls would've already been cliché enough, but having a third is just way over the top.

I don't know if it's a problem with the author's writing or the translation, but sometimes the pronouns keep changing. Particularly when Qian Renxue shows up while disguised as a man, the author/translator keeps switching between male and female pronouns, which makes it confusing to read. There's also some other translation issues. Other than that, my biggest problem with this fic is the MC. He keeps going on and on about hiding his real strength and keeping a low profile, but still shows off strength he shouldn't have, based on how he portrays himself. For example, when he first decided to act like a weakling, he promptly picks a fight with and defeats Xiao Wu, completely defeating the point of acting weak. Then, once he gets a spirit ring that lets him change the color of his spirit rings, he makes his first ring appear white instead of yellow, which is just going to make it even more suspicious when he demonstrates abilities someone with a white spirit ring shouldn't have. The fact that the MC keeps making stupid decisions like that is incredibly frustrating, especially when he keeps saying one thing, only to immediately do the opposite.

Why the hell would he show off a white ring, instead of a yellow one? There's keeping a low profile and then there's humiliating himself for no reason. Not to mention that it's going to be even more suspicious when someone with a white spirit ring demonstrates power he shouldn't reasonably have. I have to stop reading this fic, since the MC's stupid decisions keep frustrating me.

I was actually looking forward to him going to the academy, so this is really disappointing. If he's that worried about strong people noticing his level, then he basically can't go to any academy. Honestly, the author shouldn't have made him grow that quickly. I guess I'll stop reading this fic here.