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overall it's a great story, and well written. I stopped reading at chapter 57 only because he was so ridiculously OP that he could essentially be called a low level god...which isn't necessarily bad, I just was hoping it would take longer. Be t like I said, good story and well written

I've really enjoyed this fanfic so far. The story is fun, the characters are entertaining, and every chapter keeps me wanting more. I'll let a few more chapters build up before coming back, but I'll definitely continue reading. Keep up the great work, author!

Shameless author here. :) Since writing a review for your own story is always a little awkward, I'll just answer a few questions readers might have. “Is this just a retelling of Fairy Tail?" Not really. While the story follows the world of Fairy Tail, it takes a very different path, introducing new characters, original magic, expanded worldbuilding, and an entirely new perspective on Phantom Lord. “Who's the main character?" Albion Ebonveil, a quiet and emotionally guarded boy whose journey revolves around healing from trauma, discovering his Innate Magic, and learning what it truly means to connect with other people. “Will the original Fairy Tail characters matter?" Absolutely. Characters like Gajeel, Juvia, Jose, and many others all play important roles. My goal isn't to replace the original cast, but to explore them in new ways while developing original characters alongside them. “Is the story action-focused?" There are plenty of fights, but I don't want battles to exist just because they look cool. Every major fight is meant to reveal something about the characters, their beliefs, or their growth. “Will the characters become overpowered?" No. Strength is earned. Even talented characters have weaknesses, limitations, and people far stronger than themselves. Growth takes time. “What's the biggest focus of the story?" Character development. I want the relationships between the characters to matter just as much as the magic, the battles, and the world itself. “How often do you update?" I aim to release new chapters every few days while making sure each chapter is something I'm genuinely proud of. Finally, thank you to everyone who's decided to give this story a chance. Whether you've been here since Chapter 1 or just discovered it, I truly appreciate you taking the time to read something I've poured so much passion into. I hope you enjoy Albion's journey as much as I've enjoyed writing it.

Story is so slow while I enjoy reading some slow burn from time to time i cnt bear with this one I'm sorry!!! It's still very good but this one is not for me

amazing story. at the beginning I was doubtful on the potential of the story but u exceeded expectation

pretty good story so far hope you keep it up and a request to give the MC some overpowered but balanced powers if possible and if you are going to and not decided what kind then give him the power of the yami yami no mi mixed with shadow monarch powers.

Imma be honest this is a really really good read i like it alot and ngl wish u all the best author and I'm wishing for more chapters

It good I like the approach the author have with characters and as well how Leon the main character know when he teaching John he noticed he interpreted the lesson different able to notice not like other story where the main character tech a lesson does not realize that their student took different understanding an ignore it.

When I saw the first three chapters and the r18 tag I thought it will be one of those sloppy fanfic. But was amazed about the fact that the author tries to include so many worlds. My opinion about what path Muzan should follow it should be evolution like the followers of the outer gods or something similar related to flesh, blood and immortality

“L O V E” this is this is probably one of the best thing I’ve read so far don’t stop your doing good

best lookism ff for me , If you don't like sad back stories for the plot to move forward then this is for you Mc is likable and he works hard ..... and when he get setback its don't annoy it just gets better ........

So far its pretty good held back by its lack of chapters and updates but I'm starved for a good RWBY fanfic especially one like this with fluid writing and good humor looking good so far keep it up and please update it.

Yusuke’s the goat. Yu Yu Hakusho is a goatee anime. I hope you enjoy how I intertwine the two worlds together.

It was missing the rest. When are you coming back? इसका सीक्वल नहीं था. आप कब वापस आ रहे हैं? The story is good, but it needs a continuation, man. The OC is Lucifer—there are hardly any fanfics about him on the internet. I loved how the character protects Elena; I mean, in the series, she’s just a human caught between two vampires who are a hundred years older than her—leave the girl alone! It’s only when those two show up that shit hits the fan—Stefan (the ex-Ripper) and the other one, Damon (the serial killer). Continue the story—urgent.

So far so good the story is great but im hesitating to continue reading for the story showing sign of Ntr but not the good one but the bad one. I hate Netorare

Very good, keep working and add more chapters. The story is fantastic, especially since his strength is similar to Asta's from Black Clover. It also reminds me of the story of the Gods Slayer, who possesses a power opposite to hers, which is based on faith. Keep working and add more chapters, more and more!

Its pretty decent so far. Its at a critical point right now bc his cheat was just introduced. Hard to say how things will go. As long as it’s not dropped I’ll keep reading for now.

hvg is a good writer. the textbook definition of a good fanfic writer. everyday teo chapters, decent strorytelling, powerscaling so on and so forth. i wouldn’t go so far to say this is his best work yet, but it’s gaining

Es una gran historia que fascina más con cada nuevo capítulo. El único inconveniente que le encuentro (y que tampoco es tan grave) es la regularidad de las actualizaciones; por lo demás, es uno de los mejores fanfics que he leído.

Muito bom. Realmente não sei o que esperar desta novel. Quero apenas que não seja mais uma história infinita, em que passar pelos mundos seja algo fútil e sem nenhum peso narrativo. Pois, tendo em vistas o nível de poder do protagonista, praticamente qualquer verso em que ele esteja ele será alguém poderoso. Então, o conflito precisa envolver problemas que não possam ser resolvidos apenas com força. O ponto mais interessante da trama seria justamente a evolução espiritual do personagem.

Amazing Story. I really hope the author keeps going with this one. There are plenty of T.V. worlds to explore within this one and plenty of women to meet. MC isn't an A-hole to women and very straight forward with them to start. Just got to watch out for that Cheat Tag. it isn't on the MC, but he has no boundaries towards other's relationships lol.