I send myself to the world
This book is also known as the Book of You.
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For the rest of my life, every word is you. He Junyu
You are the love letter that the world has given me.
Lawyer He's Love: Are you the martial arts secret book that the world gave me?
A certain someone cupped his fists and went online." No, my name is not Love Letter, nor is it a martial arts secret manual. My name is Jing Shu."
Lawyer He: Regarding this matter, let's debate it properly.
Jingshu: If you can fight, you won't force it.
Lawyer He,"Miss Jing, a gentleman speaks but doesn't move…"
Jingshu: Release Jingwu, hold your weapons, go!
Lawyer He was speechless.
Jing Wu,"Who am I?" Where am I? What am I doing?
Miss Jing's profile:
The principle of life was to shout when you see injustice on the road and act when you should.
The criteria for finding a boyfriend was that he was good-looking. Hmm? Shallow? Then he would be pleasing to the eye. What kind of person can you find pleasing to the eye? She was good-looking.
His pet phrase was,"This man, I see that your bones are clear and strange, and you look handsome. Why don't you come to my household register and live there permanently?" Hmm? Don't listen? Release Jing Wu, grab your weapons, go!
Later on, Jing Shu met a handsome young man on the road and casually said,"This young man, I see that your bones are clear and strange, and your appearance…"
Lawyer He sneered,"Have you forgotten who the owner of the house is?"
Jing Shu thought that she had recruited a weak little white cat, but who knew that it was a fierce big black panther. Help…
You are the warmest message that life has given me.
auspicious night
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