When a max level big boss picks up a level zero little girl
[Wear it quickly, 1v1, Double Clean Sweet Pet]
Deermouth regretted it.
Which treasure wasn't shiny and which treasure wasn't beautiful?
Why did he take things so hard to get his hands on the Heavenly Lord's divine egg?
Now, it was time to go down to the lower realm with the system to find the child.
A Heaven Realm's max level big shot had been so shameless that he had to run around the three thousand worlds for a level zero divine egg that had yet to hatch. It was really embarrassing!
At first, Deer Mouth thought so.
After that…
The little girl's voice was soft,"Brother, someone is bullying me."
The little human's eyes lit up.
The little beauty pitifully said,"General, I miss you ~"
Thus, Lu Xian's thoughts changed. He snatched the marriage stone and kidnapped the Heaven Monarch cub.
"Father-in-law, don't I look like your future son-in-law?" he asked, running to the Heavenly Lord to propose marriage.
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[Little skirt: 930049386, the treasure of reading books can enter the skirt to chat ~]
There was also the completed book,"The Little Jiaojiao Who Came Through Is Spoiled Again", which was super sweet!
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L’histoire est vraiment bien mais le seule point négatif que je peux donner, c’est quand je lis un livre, j’aime que la narration soit écrite comme si nous étions dans la peau des personnages. Quand nous lisons, il faut ressentir tout les passages du livre et malheureusement, dans le vôtre nous avons pas complètement la narration du personnage. Le livre n’est pas entièrement le POV des personnages et certains passages sont écrits comme si nous étions à l’extérieur de l’histoire. Voici un exemple: Giorgia donna une gifle à son fiancé Raymond Alors que si nous étions dans la peau du personnage, cela donnerait: J’ai donné une gifle à Raymond Ce livre a vraiment du potentiel mais il faut le revoir entièrement pour que quand nous lisons le livre, la narration devrait être seulement et complètement du POV du personnage.