Hello, dear readers! First of all, thank you for taking the time to explore "Temporal Director." Your feedback and thoughts mean the world to me, and I'm grateful for each review—whether it's praise or constructive criticism. Every comment helps me grow as a writer and brings me closer to delivering the best story I can for all of you. Writing "Temporal Director" has been an incredible journey, filled with twists and turns that mirror the narrative itself. As you delve into the world of time manipulation, power struggles, and deep character arcs, I hope you'll find the same excitement that I had while crafting this tale. Please feel free to share your honest opinions. Your insights not only motivate me but also help guide the future direction of the story. Once again, thank you for your support, and I can't wait to see where this journey takes us together! Best regards, Fork

The writing is good, maybe at times a bit repetitive on words and phrases. But I don't dare to say it's bad, it's a way to highlight something. However, truth be told, there are other ways a certain concept can be wrote. I'm no expert in English, so I'm not so sure. The story is good, the idea is amazing per se, I usually read more slow paced development, but this... I wonder how it's still so complex even if it is fast paced. Time traveling is difficult to implement on a story, but so far author did a very good job with his brain. Character development is... I dunno... I want to say it's well built and ignored at the same time. Author will not write every thought the characters do, but the final changes that a series of thoughts and experiences brought. And... well, you have to read the story if you want to understand what I wanna say.[img=Speechless]