Review Detail of UnderwaterDreamer in Temporal Director

The writing is good, maybe at times a bit repetitive on words and phrases. But I don't dare to say it's bad, it's a way to highlight something. However, truth be told, there are other ways a certain concept can be wrote. I'm no expert in English, so I'm not so sure. The story is good, the idea is amazing per se, I usually read more slow paced development, but this... I wonder how it's still so complex even if it is fast paced. Time traveling is difficult to implement on a story, but so far author did a very good job with his brain. Character development is... I dunno... I want to say it's well built and ignored at the same time. Author will not write every thought the characters do, but the final changes that a series of thoughts and experiences brought. And... well, you have to read the story if you want to understand what I wanna say.[img=Speechless]