Review Detail of Dantalien_728 in Marvel: I’m Spider-Man in this Damn Reincarnation

Well, I have read the first 10 chapters so far. The story feels good, and I don't think there is much to point out. I should clarify that English is not my first language, so I can't really comment on grammar errors and things like that. However, if there's something that bothers me a bit about the story, it's the random information dumps that happen sometimes, or the loose comments Peter makes when he's thinking or narrating. Maybe there's too much 'telling' and not enough 'showing,' but I'm not sure if I understand that correctly. That would be the only thing I could mention regarding my expectations. I hope the harem isn't too extensive, like 'gotta catch them all.' I prefer there to be two or three girls with whom the protagonist establishes a healthy relationship. I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops.