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The very first paragraph ends in an unintelligible sentence. Do you proofread at all?

Huh ? What paragraph. If you are talking about this rewiev than i dont and if you are speaking about the first chapter then i am New to this and english is not my main language so my writing can be bad

Let me ask, why bother writing in English? Do you realize how frustrating it is as a native speaker to see all these broken English novels around? Why not write only in the language(s) you are fluent in? And considering how many ai stories are on Here by that same group, why doesn't anyone even bother using something as simple as Microsoft Word for a spell check?

To improve my english so i write here. And i am writing from telephone so i cant be bothered with that but i will try to use ai if i find one that is both free and good. And please, my story at least have some grammar but some of the storys i read dont have that but because the story is interesting i read that book. And if you do not like my writing please dont read it

And thank you for the suggestion as from now on i will use ai in the end of my chapters to correct it but i dont know if i should correct the past chapters

Noo! Do not use ai. A spell checker that finds bad language is very different than an ai that will rewrite the story. Microsoft Word isn't A.I a spell checker isn't a.i They may call themselves "powered by a.i" but they are not. And please improve your English by speaking it aloud, writing bad English isn't how to practice English, you'll only form bad habits. You need to speak English fluenty so that you know when things "sound" wrong. Then you can write English.