at chapter 4 the dialog got cringe and it also had ALOT of mistakes and unintelligible sentences. Its like the author lost grip on the story and the MC over dosed on holy water and became an angel 😇 .
Hitdover
Liked it!
SUKAHitdover:oops, how are you? English is not my primary language, when I finish writing, I have to translate it in Translate