Interesting and fast paced start. While it is noticeable that the writing is of a novice, the storytelling is captivating and gives the room for characters to grow. Well done and keep writing!
Haname_Aiko
Disukai oleh 1 orang
Thank you so much for the feedback! I just started, so I'm glad I'm not so bad at it (≧▽≦) I hope you enjoy the story !