1° The Author made the shadow monarch, the man who can transform any living being into an immortal shadow warrior into a vegan who doesn't want to kill animals. 2° The protagonist is super strong from the beginning, but hides his strength '-' if you're going to make an OP protagonist in chapter 1 at least let him show off! 3° typical Chinese description of jade beauties and such 4° There are a few other minor issues, but I'm too lazy to point them out, but one of the biggest ones is that MC doesn't kill beasts for money. That's right, what you're reading, the shadow monarch who has the power to resurrect the dead does not kill wild and dangerous beasts that can attack anyone.
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Lol, and now it's on Patreon 😂 There is no good ATG fic in WN.😕
I promise you that you would not be able to say any of this after chapter number 40. I made mistakes and I will be correcting them. In fact, the process of correction is already started chapter 23 onwards. Sorry for the bad Reader Experience
Not fully, I am currently writing chapters. Once I am done writing 3 more chapters, it will make my Ko-Fi 10 chapters ahead of the WN. Need to give My paid members the special treatment they have paid for
Lord_Azathoth:Lol, and now it's on Patreon 😂 There is no good ATG fic in WN.😕
If you were to kindly read the Problems notice chapter, then you would have known that I have already pointed all the above mistakes and denied some of them as utter nonsense like some of your points, Kindly read before you type here
