The story does seem interesting, the writing quality is also very good but the only problem is pacing, I think its slow but it's just starting so it could be just the author setting up the background and everything
EgoForge
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SUKANo no, things are happening at a good pace, and the interactions are also not stretched it's just that nothing majorly interesting is happening, like some suffering, power up, fight, trauma, political drama (i like mc to go through some trauma if he took some other body not just immediately accepts it); That's why i said it's just starting, so author could be just setting things up, the main things will be coming after🙂 good luck
EgoForge:Was it really slow? Dang, here I thought it was fast paced. I even cut and shortened the sentences without making it too much detailed. Tsk, tsk.
First_Absolute:No no, things are happening at a good pace, and the interactions are also not stretched it's just that nothing majorly interesting is happening, like some suffering, power up, fight, trauma, political drama (i like mc to go through some trauma if he took some other body not just immediately accepts it); That's why i said it's just starting, so author could be just setting things up, the main things will be coming after🙂 good luck