Review Detail of OBEYDE_X in The Infinite Path

Thanks for the review.

well I would say the only good thing about this novel is the idea/concept to create this novel.. this not to dismiss this novel but to criticise the author to make improvements.. I have read 2 chapter and stopped because so many thing just doesn't make sense.. I would suggest to set the age off the mc atleast to between 6-9 years to make everything happend up till chap 2 plausible.. also there is a lot of spelling and grammer mistakes.. I would suggest to rewrite/correct the chapter before writing new ones.. please do your research because it's not just an age issue.. Even if you want a fast pace novel or OP MC.. just meditating for 1-2 and him reaching foundation stage doesnt seem plausible.. of course it could happen because of the system but then you would have build your novel/chapters that way.. now it just seems the mc makes major leaps out of nowhere.. Even though I have read only 2 chapter I can still make out of your writing that you also need to work on your world building, character building etc.. again all in all the novel has some potential if you make some(a lot of) corrections