Review Detail of Bro_is_bored in FTWD: Survive the Zombie Apocalypse

Do you recommend any grammatically? Translate by chatgpt, solve grammar problems by quillbot... I thought it wasn't that bad.

Using Grammarly makes it feel like AI written, same with all the other AI help. Maybe use wordtune to fix little mistakes here and there. To translate use Yandex.

It is difficult to understand what is going on in the story and very unpleasant to read. You need make story in a flow . Just read any top novel and come back n reads your . You will get what i m saying

I love zombies stories and i hope you will do justice to this genre in this app 🙏🏻😢.

I already know what the error is, that is solved from my draft 42... I will try to translate the previous chapters again to solve it

your writing quality has improved . Thanks for taking the criticism positively and done something about it .👍🏻