Review Detail of brad891 in Omniscience eyes

Wow. I didn't expect that. Yes, it had some grammar issues, but overall, it looks promising. The characters are loveable(Dharma and Amelia), and the best part is (if it's true) that it's already a well-developed story. This means it won't be left unfinished like other web novel stories, and to be honest, it sounds great. (Again, if it's true) I hope you succeed in your book.