Review Detail of BeastNaBh in Reincarnated with Villain System in Indian Movies

Item: Reincarnated with Villain System in Indian Movies
Rating: 2.6

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BeastNaBhLv32mthBeastNaBh

Bro this fic is not like a novel or story at all it feels like reading movie script. There are no dialogues, emotions, play and direction in here. At first I was so happy that finally an Indian fic is here but these here just killed my mood

Reincarnated with Villain System in Indian Movies

DattaDhebe

Disukai oleh 3 orang

SUKA

Balasan2

DattaDhebePenulisDattaDhebe

Are you able to see any improvements in writing or is it still an emotionless story ?

23d

BeastNaBhLv3BeastNaBh

Well i read It all and by observing all of this i will say that there are improvements in here worth noting but still it lacks that emotions which are carried in the words but well this is the learning face of the author so don't take this as critisism but as an advice.

2mth