im not fluent in English so i can't correct the grammar wether there is mistakes or not. but the story kinda refreshing and new. stable updates, world building is fine... mc power system is good ... overall .. its nice read to enjoy to pass your day
LazyBarbarian
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SUKALazyBarbarian:Thank you for your thoughts. If you had any specific suggestions too, please fell free to share them!