Review Detail of superAyan in Ascension : Dawn Of The Third Evolution

The characters are hot haha I'm already in love with Maximillian's character design!! I got engrossed reading this story because it was really written well (tho just read upto ch14) and the plot is thick and very natural. I can't find anything to criticize at all😆 the pacing, the grammar, the writing, all 💯! I'm aiming to write like this😌 It's such a wonderful read, author!