I've read about 15 chapters and thee story would've been a lot better if the author had a editor or someone they know read over their work, since they make a lot of mistakes and structure sentences strangely. If you can look past the poor English its a cool story and a cool concept in general it 100% has potential
The_Immortal159
Disukai oleh 2 orang
SUKAThe_Immortal159:I appreciate your review... Well I am just working alone so it's hard to find all the mistakes but I will work on my grammar 🙏🙏