There are literal love heart emoticons in the story. I cannot explain how much of a turn-off that is. My recommendation is not to do that. I gave it 3 stars because I couldn't get past the love hearts, and if the story gets better from there, I haven't read it.
Beat_Man
Liked it!
SUKAYea my bad on that one, when I first started writing this I was inspired by other books and in one of them I saw them using the love hearts. So I saw it as unique and wanted to try it, but after getting multiple people to complain about them made me reconsider, but don’t worry the hearts are only in the first chapter and I will edit it out soon, thanks for the review.