Besides not having a synopsis, the pokemon battles are kinda boring and barely described. The trainers just shout out moves and author foesn’t really bother to expand on what the pokemon do with the commands. It’s literally just ”XXX use [move]!” And ”XXX avoid it!”. Story idea is good but the execution falls abit flat. Try to make the foghts more entertaining and grant the readers more of a description of events taking place.
Chiks_Marak
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