God, it's horrible. It's like two hours of poetry from a self-deprecating teenager. I understand that he's a teenager, and I get that he's in Severus's body, but please, kill me. I can summarize the story as: "I am Severus, I am horrible for hurting my Lily. Why don't you love me? My heart is with you forever, but I will never be with you, and that makes my heart not beat." It's like a marathon of secondhand embarrassment. I like drama, but not so poorly done. I don't know if that changes in the future; I hope it does. Good luck to anyone brave enough to read it.
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No. It is worse. The first chapters made me want to vomit. It's bad. Disgusting even. As for the latter chapters? I dunno. Didn't read them yet. I will try. Will see. But really. I have no idea why this author thought it would be a good thing to give his transmigrated MC Snape's feelings. Logically, NOBODY would want that. It's like being mind-fked. It sucks and makes the story really bad. And the author writes in this stupid flowery way that reading is starting to get really irksome. It starts to feel like a chore.
Anotoki:Lol, surely it's not that bad
tbf the beginning of a story is meant to capture your attention and get you involved into the world it is not completely turn you off cause the mc is unbearable
PrimalWhiteStar:than you need to read more... the start is self-deprecating, but the MC develop out of that phase pretty much in a good way, you just need to read the story past the first few chapters
true... but the story is good after the depressing introduction and a "bit" of it can interest the reader...
DaoistOfeOTA:tbf the beginning of a story is meant to capture your attention and get you involved into the world it is not completely turn you off cause the mc is unbearable
PrimalWhiteStar:true... but the story is good after the depressing introduction and a "bit" of it can interest the reader...