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Not_So_Smart
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There are only few chapters but so many things already happened. I can see the hint of world building, the development is also good. Language is also fairly good. There were some problems, but over all decent novel. MC has no goal right now, but I saw Author's comment that he will give him goal through journey, so let's see. I don't like MCs without any proper goal.

Vile Dominion

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