webnovel

Review Detail of ImpishWolf in Transmigrate inside a Web Novel as a Side Character.

Ulasan detail

ImpishWolf
ImpishWolfLv33dImpishWolf

I only read up to chapter 9 and then dropped, so it is my review based on that. Let's get the common points out of the way first. Grammar. As the author said in the synopsis, English isn't their first language, so writing is a bit cranky and needs editing. But, it's readable. Writing - like I said I only read 9 chaps, so can't say if they improve later. But, in those 9 chaps, I felt the author isn't good at writing conversations, expressing characters emotion sometimes, bad fighting scenes and the character itself is vague sometimes. The mc got thrown into the novel while he was riding a bus and fell asleep, he woke up from hearing explosion sounds and saw fire outside. So, he sat on the bus without getting off to check his phone notification. -_- You know what, I don't wanna write all this sh*t for this, the reason I dropped this because, mc was handling a event right after waking up where humanities enemy demons attacked massacre happened and he somehow being weak maneuvered the situation to make a deal with the demon, still get bamboozled but gets saved by plot and becomes bootleg sukuna for a moment. He gained enough strength to kill the enemy, but decides to play boring game. Time runs out of time, the enemy lives because of PLOT (she is sexy, has a sad back story) and even gets cursed to grow slowly (takes more exp to level up, and yes theres system, mc do lvl up) an unreasonable useless nerf to the already bottom tier not even side character mc. Anyway, a question may arise if it's okay to judge from so little reading. Let me tell you this, prologues are a foundation for readers to dive deeper into any story, and if you fk it up then it's gonna stick around. Webnovel is a trash heap already, why tf would anyone waste their time on a story expecting it to improve when they can just find any other less stunky trash to read.

Transmigrate inside a Web Novel as a Side Character.

Resett

Disukai oleh 1 orang

SUKA
empty img

Tidak ada balasan.Jadilah yang pertama!