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Review Detail of SlimeSage in Marvel: Tech System

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SlimeSage
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Everything was just fine and all until the author decided to have Mc get beaten up by Wolverine while possessing Ch-24 and not to mention NZT which is supposed to give Mc a huge advantage against Wolverine. The fight scene with Wolverine is too generic and anime-like, how can Wolverine disappear in his vision and suddenly appear in front of him like some generic anime fight scene. In the movies and even the comics, Wolverine is NOT that fast to suddenly disappear and appear. And here I thought I finally found a good Marvel fanfic. I know mistakes are inevitable and no one is perfect but from what I just read, this is clearly not a mistake and the author wrote the fight scene with purpose probably just to give the Mc character development. Anyways, this is my honest review, I wish you luck with your fanfic author-san.

Marvel: Tech System

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Not to mention that his perception should be extremely improved by mixing the chromosome with the nzt.