Review Detail of noobhobby0 in Nexus Path

Shameless author review here. As my username suggests I'm a complete noob at writing, so expect a myriad of different problems and issues. Any feedback is always welcome, I'm going into this blind after all. Will try to release chapters once a day, but life is life, and sometimes that may not be possible but I will try my best. Anyways I hope you enjoy.