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2024-08-06 18:52

creo que el principal problema de esta historia es la escritura porque por lo menos para mi al principio fue muy confusa para mi lo que estaba pasando por ejemplo no sabias diferenciar entre los compañeros y el prota como estaban usando el cuerpo haciendote al final perder las ganas de ler la historia eso para mi seria el principal punto de mejora de la historia

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