Review Detail of Enlightened_Rookie in The Hidden Disciple

Great story brotha! Really looking forward to seeing where this goes. I don’t post many 5 star reviews but here you go man. The only thing I’m not sure if I like yet is the scene with Dumbledore and while the fight scenes go hard af, they are really brutal for children’s fights. Also the first chapter is pretty wack man. Not sure how I feel about Allyssum yet, she feels a bit shoehorned in, but I’m really looking forward to seeing where this goes! Thanks man!