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It's a pretty good novel, currently my favorite HP fan fic. All of the low reviews are people nit picking things like Harry's full name being Hadrian, much like Tim or Timmy is often used by people named Timothy. Others like the guy complaining about his memories being sealed need to just read the novel for a few more chapters, it gets removed quickly. Now on to a proper review. The grammar and spelling is good, and it often updates daily. While I hated how Lily was convinced to send Harry to her family, other than that I like the characters, and I love to hate the characters when they do our Harry wrong! Lily realised how messed up things where and has been freaking out over it, so at least she knows what a mistake she made. Now James in this novel is a fool, he clearly never grew up from his Hogwarts years and ruined his relationship with Harry because he was a petty loser. The story has been good so far and the only thing I've disliked is how good Hary is with his knight training, even if he's super talented with it, with how competent he is as a young teen, even if wizards are stronger overall there is plenty of reason to train it on the side.

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

TalesByJaz

Liked it!

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Thanks for the review. The knight training is going to be the hero of the Basilisk fight. So had to speed things up to get Harry at a decent level before that fight.