Review Detail of cytwz in Heavenly Restriction in Naruto

I’m glad you enjoyed, the first chapter is meant to be a bit confusing, I did it that way to make it clear that the character isn’t from the modern world or a world where he would have knowledge of the Naruto world because I’m sure there will be comments later on asking why certain things happen to the protagonist or why he doesn’t do certain things and the reason is simply he has no way of knowing things about the Naruto world. I feel like this will be very interesting for showing of Toji’s skills as a assassin and his strategic mind as you said because a lot of times I feel like authors nerf there characters in the story and I don’t want to do that I want my character to be op but have room to make the fights in the story interesting and I feel like doing this (bringing in a character basically blind into the world) allows for those interesting scenes no matter how strong he is. And about what you said I agree Toji isn’t a ninja but in a way I’d say his style of assination or how he goes about engaging or preparing for battle is more ninja like then a lot of the characters in Naruto. Anyways let me know your thoughts or ideas in the future if you have any, the start will be a bit slow and my semester just started up again but I’ll try to keep the story going.