Review Detail of Ms_Squirtle in A Song of Fire and Steel (Avatar the Last Airbender / GOT fanfic)

Personally, its too much descriptive info in each chapter, slow paced and still a lot of typos. Too little dialog to carry along the character development. Also repeating explanations of the same thing even from different characters is just repetative. good plot idea tho, interesting to see where this can go. 🙏