Review Detail of mercurystarship in Spider-Man 0X
Ulasan detail
Okay, I gave it an honest shot, wasn't expecting too much. The writing seems a bit immature, just not my thing. P.S.: Author, my review isn't meant to troll you, just sharing my honest opinion. Feel free to remove it if you'd like.
Spider-Man 0X
Xcalibur_Xc
Disukai oleh 32 orang
SUKABalasan8
>.> The fact that people still think Yuri is NTR in a harem is silly to me. Have they ever had sex? Do they know how tiring it is to please one person throughly? Like I get the male power fantasy of beautiful women everywhere, but in reality, one guy can't do it alone. idk bout you, gentlemen, but I enjoy a little Yuri in my life. poly.
Haku_Ouroboros:nd Yuri ntr 🤮
Dude, I've read almost 20 chapters, and I gotta say, you've got some writing chops. When I say it's not mature, it's not about the quality of your writing but more about how the story feels a bit unfocused even after all those chapters. It needs some setup to really grab attention. If you work on that, I bet it could skyrocket in quality. Best of luck with your writing journey ahead!
Xcalibur_Xc:Everyone got their own tastes, I can respect that. Thanks. Atleast you didn't try to troll like most who leaves a ff and drops review just for fun.
