Review Detail of Hannah_Rich_Burton in Cursed Quest

Item: Cursed Quest
Rating: 3.2

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Hannah_Rich_BurtonLv18mthHannah_Rich_Burton

Really good start! I’m not a fan of adverbs and there was a few and the dialogue was a little weird. I would love to see more what he’s seeing cause I have no idea what his surroundings are!

Cursed Quest

FriendlyPlanet

Disukai oleh 1 orang

SUKA

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FriendlyPlanetPenulisFriendlyPlanet

Thanks for reviewing my novel! I'm 14 so i might miss a couple of errors. Also i might take a bit more time to write each chapter and make it longer. Thanks for reviewing again.

8mth

FriendlyPlanetPenulisFriendlyPlanet

also i re-wrote the chapter and tried to make it better

8mth