Review Detail of lockhart2009 in Advent of the Three Calamities

This is my second review ! I just caught up and I'm so glad I read this. Even though it has a small amount of chapters at the moment, the scenes, character interactions, build-up are perfect. I actually quite like Aoife and Julien's interactions. I've gotten pass the weird halts in paragraphs, and I actually quite enjoy it now. I did say that it was a sad attempt at suspense but the more I read, the more I feel that I am proven wrong. The plot is well done and I can tell the author has big plans for it in the future. The protagonist is well written. He has a personality and not quite like the self insert ones. He's humorous and vulnerable which is a perfect mix. Though it is obvious that is not like the original Julien. Julien's progressions is always a painful read. Not because it's crap but rather because I sympathize with him. It must be insanely painful to experience others' severe emotions. Even I couldn't handle emotions such as grievance. That's it for now. I'll keep up with this novel as much as I can (Every two weeks, I mean lol. I like to stockpile a bit.) I do wonder though if this novel is contracted.