Review Detail of DaoistxyWPzL in Cultivating Stars

Good start to the story, a creative way of setting up what's coming. The concept in chapter 0 was pretty good, but I couldn't help but notice the use of 'big' words that might affect immersion, at least for me. Chapter 1 has a slow start, expected to set the environment and backstory of the character. However, the event that follows up reveals a rather unique plot twist that I somehow wasn't expecting. I really hope to see how this work turns out, and good luck!