First thing I've noticed was the way the creator vividly described the characters, detailed and precised. Although it's a bit confusing having introduced four/five characters in one chapter, still the flow was good. I also would like to comment that in chapter 1, the scene was repeated twice. Maybe the author wasn't aware of it though. Great start.
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SUKAJamtee_library:Thanks so much for the review 😊. The mistake would be corrected. Hope you follow through till the end much love from Jamteelibrary [img=recommend]