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ZeRo
ZeRoLv39mth
2024-01-23 19:53

ok , so the writing quality i don’t know man i don’t have much experience with it but i’m comfortable reading it so it’s very good in my opinion , as for updating stability it’s like 3 to 4 chapters a week if not more so very good , for the story in my opinion it’s also good but it need more chapters to get to know the MC in my opinion he is funny and a little bit childish at first be he will grow up so keep reading and childish doesn’t mean dumb for anyone, he is smart and use his knowledge to make himself more powerful and use his powers very good , for harem or no , i think it’s a no harem type (i don’t remember sorry but it’s more towards no harem) i’ve just came from chap 32 so i didn’t check the previous chaps for this review, character design is very go till now i will not talk about it since if you read the story you know MC is likeble , as for world background it’s mixed there’s x-men (from movie?) and it’s marvel so yea, there’s wakanda for spoiler sake i will go no further, but overall i recommend any of you to give it a shot cuz i really like the novel.i’m no professional reviewer i just write what is on my mind.

In Marvel with the Force?

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Disukai oleh 1 orang

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Ty bro

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If I wanted to read something with a character that can 4th wall break I would directly read the deadpool comics instead of a knockkoff... heck rick sanchez from rick and morty can do a 4th wall break but they dont do it becuase it is already overplayed. Only deadpool can make it work and make it fun.

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AI-generated work. Give it a read and see for yourself. The author just copy pasted it with a slight adjustment, but he made a very common mistake. Just read, you will notice it.

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