Review Detail of SHADILLAC09 in Unique Gamers Travels

I will preface this by saying this is a good story! If you are looking at reviews to see if you should read this or not then yes read it especially if you like an OP MC. Despite this being a good story I do have some issues with the story telling. Spoilers ahead. It annoys me how much the author keeps emphasizing how much they hate Landon. I get it!! You dont need to mention it so much especially when you make EVERY interaction with the character as toxic as possible. If I could offer any piece of advice towards this then I would say that the author missed a huge opportunity here. If you hated the character so much why not change it? Who says you have to do EVERYTHING as it happens in the show? You even have the convenient excuse of butterfly effects of a new character being thrown into mix. You could have written the character in a way that made you and your audience happy. The constant persecution of the character just feels like the story was written to spite him instead of telling the story of your OC. The story is great. And while I want to offer more constructive feedback on other aspects of the story like the pace at which the MC's relationships escalate. The MC is cool with whoever you like most from the story and barely acknowledges anyone else. She doesnt feel like she is part of their story at all. She feels like an outsider who just came to bang Hope. But I feel like it was done in a way where the MC had to get in there before Landon. Again, it just feels like since his name was mentioned in the story everything just became about keeping good things away from him.