The character and the story are very good, but one thing that bothers me is how long it takes for things to happen. A fight against some thieves lasted more than 2 chapters, the first mission lasted about 3 chapters, I think it would be better to make big chapters where a situation happens and ends in the chapter itself. But it's still a great story
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