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Rak
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ill be honest, this body snatching business and going again and again with original sakura about how this is HER body is too much, when this is the body of baby sakura and both future sakura and anish are occupying wrongly, and after repeatedly saying that sakura isnt useless, u still have her act useless for 10 plus chapters with no change in how she treats others. U said at start it cant be possible to only think about sasuke unless u have brain damange but yet here is future sakura doing exactly that. i like anish but he is too nonchalant about how sakura treats him while shouting he is not M. im not sure if this story is for me. ive done the poison testing, u guys try it out if ur ok with a emotionally stable MC who acts stupid from time to time

Reincarnated in Naruto as/with Sakura?

Hooin_Kyoma

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Hooin_Kyoma
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Thank you for reading and letting me know your thoughts! Also just saying this for people who read this review, the body snatching business is for about four chapters I think? Including resolution? If this is too much... then well... I guess you are right. .............................................................................................................................. *spoiler warning* .............................................................................................................................. I haven't really unraveled Sakura's emotional spiral in the novel yet but she is still only holding on Sasuke because she hasn't met him yet. There are already plenty of hints that show that Sakura is only holding onto Sasuke as a form of obsession that she herself recognizes since she already at multiple times wants Sasuke to be more like Megumi instead. And for her being useless, I did tackle this in the story but looks like I wasn't successful in getting my point across. YES Sakura is USELSS IN COMBAT. but that is only because she has never trained for it in her entire life. She is useless because she's measured by the standard of combat and measures herself with the same standards. The idea is to change her perception of herself and show her exactly how she can regain her own confidence and grow from there.

Rak
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i read till chapter 24, while the internal mindscape challenge between future sakura and mc ended early, its still going on, and mc potential solution is... to make a new body for... himself?, for me mc was shown as being able to retain knowledge AND great detective, since he cant figure out whats happened to him or sakura, he creates a goal to ..... instead of tryna figure it out - to get a new body. he calls the new parents mom and dad in his mind but is A-ok for leaving the body without even tryna fight future sakura for it. for all we know this is a different universe and future sakura is the one who is invading. anyways. its your novel author-san. its a good novel but maybe not for me yet.

Hooin_Kyoma:Thank you for reading and letting me know your thoughts! Also just saying this for people who read this review, the body snatching business is for about four chapters I think? Including resolution? If this is too much... then well... I guess you are right. .............................................................................................................................. *spoiler warning* .............................................................................................................................. I haven't really unraveled Sakura's emotional spiral in the novel yet but she is still only holding on Sasuke because she hasn't met him yet. There are already plenty of hints that show that Sakura is only holding onto Sasuke as a form of obsession that she herself recognizes since she already at multiple times wants Sasuke to be more like Megumi instead. And for her being useless, I did tackle this in the story but looks like I wasn't successful in getting my point across. YES Sakura is USELSS IN COMBAT. but that is only because she has never trained for it in her entire life. She is useless because she's measured by the standard of combat and measures herself with the same standards. The idea is to change her perception of herself and show her exactly how she can regain her own confidence and grow from there.
Rak
RakLv5Rak

also i want to say, its easy to find issues but very difficult to write an original thought. no matter what i have said or others say, good job

Hooin_Kyoma:Thank you for reading and letting me know your thoughts! Also just saying this for people who read this review, the body snatching business is for about four chapters I think? Including resolution? If this is too much... then well... I guess you are right. .............................................................................................................................. *spoiler warning* .............................................................................................................................. I haven't really unraveled Sakura's emotional spiral in the novel yet but she is still only holding on Sasuke because she hasn't met him yet. There are already plenty of hints that show that Sakura is only holding onto Sasuke as a form of obsession that she herself recognizes since she already at multiple times wants Sasuke to be more like Megumi instead. And for her being useless, I did tackle this in the story but looks like I wasn't successful in getting my point across. YES Sakura is USELSS IN COMBAT. but that is only because she has never trained for it in her entire life. She is useless because she's measured by the standard of combat and measures herself with the same standards. The idea is to change her perception of herself and show her exactly how she can regain her own confidence and grow from there.
Hooin_Kyoma
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Ah! That is true that he didn't try to fight against her even though he probably could by simply alter his mindscape to kill her, but he's not the type to try and do such a thing. As far as creating a new body goes, you bring up a good point, I should've probably gone more in depth with these things.... but he didn't entertain the thought of creating one himself because of the sheer time and effort it would take and he'd feel guilty during all that time about lying to, what he considers to be, his own parents and because Sakura might react negatively to all of this and simply keep annoying him 24/7.

Rak:i read till chapter 24, while the internal mindscape challenge between future sakura and mc ended early, its still going on, and mc potential solution is... to make a new body for... himself?, for me mc was shown as being able to retain knowledge AND great detective, since he cant figure out whats happened to him or sakura, he creates a goal to ..... instead of tryna figure it out - to get a new body. he calls the new parents mom and dad in his mind but is A-ok for leaving the body without even tryna fight future sakura for it. for all we know this is a different universe and future sakura is the one who is invading. anyways. its your novel author-san. its a good novel but maybe not for me yet.
Hooin_Kyoma
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Haha! I've written reviews for books I read too, I know how it feels when the author does something you don't like, don't worry about it. I just hope you are able to have fun reading!

Rak:also i want to say, its easy to find issues but very difficult to write an original thought. no matter what i have said or others say, good job
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