Review Detail of Olivia_star in Billionaire's LAME excuse

Item: Billionaire's LAME excuse
Rating: 2.8

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Olivia_starLv46mthOlivia_star

This story is not understandable, poor writing quality

Billionaire's LAME excuse

CCLAUDIAH

Liked it!

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ClaudiahLv4Claudiah

what's not clear, kindly elaborate for clear adjustments. thanks for taking time to go through my story

6mth

Olivia_starLv4Olivia_star

Ok, I read the story over again and I understand.You write the last paragraph of the chapter before starting.It's commendable, keep it up

6mth

Olivia_starLv4Olivia_star

It's an interesting novel but I think the composition is not quite good which makes it hard to understand.

Claudiah:what's not clear, kindly elaborate for clear adjustments. thanks for taking time to go through my story

6mth

Olivia_starLv4Olivia_star

Apologies for quick and inaccurate judgement

Claudiah:what's not clear, kindly elaborate for clear adjustments. thanks for taking time to go through my story

6mth

ClaudiahLv4Claudiah

thanks I'll look into it

Olivia_star:It's an interesting novel but I think the composition is not quite good which makes it hard to understand.

6mth

ClaudiahLv4Claudiah

it's understood [img=recommend]

Olivia_star:Apologies for quick and inaccurate judgement

6mth

ClaudiahLv4Claudiah

thanks

Olivia_star:Ok, I read the story over again and I understand.You write the last paragraph of the chapter before starting.It's commendable, keep it up
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