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Jester_AdvocateLv48mth
2024-03-14 21:45

honestly should have a better grammar and actually form sentences maybe try using grammarly? but also you need to rework chapter 1-3 as they are bad if you got better noticeably and maybe the older chapters too

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dankoku
dankokuLv4

bro I think you need to use grammarly

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