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Review Detail of Raging_Silver in Endless Evolution: Last Star

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Raging_Silver
Raging_SilverLv153mthRaging_Silver

I like this book so far, and honestly, it would make a great anime. Just correct your grammar mistakes and pacing. Overall, it's a great fantasy world book. Keep going. You're doing just fine.

Endless Evolution: Last Star

Arlemit

Disukai oleh 1 orang

SUKA

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Arlemit
ArlemitPenulisArlemit

Thanks, my grammar still really sucks, doesn't it? (⁠;⁠ŏ⁠﹏⁠ŏ⁠)

Raging_Silver
Raging_SilverLv15Raging_Silver

Your book is good, though you need to fix a few things, but it is still very enjoyable.

Arlemit:Thanks, my grammar still really sucks, doesn't it? (⁠;⁠ŏ⁠﹏⁠ŏ⁠)
That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv3That_Annoying_guy

Is this single fl author?

Arlemit:Thanks, my grammar still really sucks, doesn't it? (⁠;⁠ŏ⁠﹏⁠ŏ⁠)