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Review Detail of Nightsking in Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands

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Great story so far don't remember if I left a review or not but either way here is one. The power of the MC is great it's not to OP (yet) and leaves a lot of space for future improvements other than that he has a good flaw that also gives back the threat of death. For the future it might be harder to write since the original is not finished yet but we will see by then what happens. Only negative of the story is the harem tag, which I generally don't like to read since most of the time it will take away from the characters personality from the original written story but we will see how you do it either way good luck further!

Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands

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