Review Detail of Yuri_yuri in [One Piece:From The Ashes]-(hiatus)
Ulasan detail
the story is very cliché 3/5
[One Piece:From The Ashes]-(hiatus)
Lox_Of_Sins
Liked it!
SUKABalasan4
I like them better when the protagonist transmigrated into bodies that already have an established background in the world that you can make up however you want. It's strange that the protagonist appears out of nowhere, and I didn't like that he lied to Luffy saying he knew Shanks.
Lox_Of_Sins:Fair enough. But I’m working on making it unique. For example adding Leo’s past life lore not many people do that. But I understand your preference.
Okay, good for you I guess that’s your preference. And to address the shanks part he didn’t lie that actually happened. This is lore and I’m not going to out right say it but remember when I said he had red tips in his hair? Who else had red tips. Anyway he just didn’t get the memories because I don’t want to alter his personality.
Yuri_yuri:I like them better when the protagonist transmigrated into bodies that already have an established background in the world that you can make up however you want. It's strange that the protagonist appears out of nowhere, and I didn't like that he lied to Luffy saying he knew Shanks.
Lox_Of_Sins:Okay, good for you I guess that’s your preference. And to address the shanks part he didn’t lie that actually happened. This is lore and I’m not going to out right say it but remember when I said he had red tips in his hair? Who else had red tips. Anyway he just didn’t get the memories because I don’t want to alter his personality.