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ThreyaMidnight
ThreyaMidnightLv121yr
2023-10-15 22:58

Wow. This is probably one of the greatest stories written by a first-timer in WebNovel. I can't believe the sheer quality of this book, and I find it fantastic. Please keep up the good work, dear Writer, and I hope you get vetted soon so I can drop you some power stones!

Apocalyptic World: I've Got The Second System

Solastius_Seena
4.9
99 Chs

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Solastius_Seena
Solastius_SeenaAuthor

Thank you so much for the review, you're so kind girl 😭

1yr
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Solastius_Seena
Solastius_SeenaAuthor

As an author, I will give my novel four stars! This is my first ML novel that used the first POV. So sorry for the mistake I made along the way. I'm gonna use this review section for any question that you might have! Enjoy reading

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SeraphWedd
SeraphWeddLv14

✨AMAZING✨! That's all I could say... Just kidding. A wonderful creation, with details beyond expectation, a clear worldbuilding, and beautiful grammar all throughout. I haven't read much to say more, but I'll be giving this 5⭐from what I've read alone. Great work, author! More chapters~!

1yr
CosmicArchmage
CosmicArchmageLv2

This story left me breathless! It's pure adrenaline and suspense. The characters are so realistic and captivating that you can't help but get excited with every twist of the plot. The action is impressive, and the moments of battle against various enemies keep you on the edge of your seat. The writing is full of details that immerse you in this post-apocalyptic world, and the character development is simply incredible! Excellent!

1yr
WritingInShadow
WritingInShadowLv1

the storytelling is great. the world details are nice, giving me the same vibe as Gantz-0. I am not at chapter 13 but most characters that had been introduced and become a part of their little group are males. I hope you can also add female characters as well. Keep writing.

1yr
Azure_Shard
Azure_ShardLv13

This book is GREAT. One of the best I have read in weeks. You deserve 5K popularity and 6 power stones (Which is what I have given you.)

11mth
Itz_JayJ
Itz_JayJLv2

It's pretty good I ain't gonna lie. I can't say that I will read it whenever I can, but it will be one of my top 5 choices when I want to read something. 👍

1yr
Mystic_Chronicler
Mystic_ChroniclerLv2

The premise seems intriguing with a unique twist on apocalyptic events. It keeps you wondering what's next and how the protagonist will navigate this new world with dual systems. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes.

1yr
vorlefan
vorlefanLv3

My overall feedback: 1 - It lacks a unique flavor for the MC in his usage of words and descriptions. I mean, to embed when he is describing things with his personality. Be it sarcasm, funny jokes to cope with the stress, and so on. 2 - Some scenes is a bit confuse even for a Apocalipse scene. I know its challenging, but I think that when you hit right in the unique voice for your MC, things will happen more naturally. 3 - Try to avoid repeating some words, like 'eerie', 'cacophony'. All in all, you have a new reader, keep up the good work :)

1yr
VampreWings43
VampreWings43Lv1

Off the bat cover is insanely impressive, I would gauge that your synopsis needs a little more oomf, but I assume you will eventually correct that way it attracts more users. I think its a great premise and is promising! Thanks read author!

1yr
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