Review Detail of gbaquero in Deviant Devil

It's a pretty good novel. The only thing the author needs to work on is the story's pacing. Sometimes it feels too fast and you may get lost. Other than that, I do believe that the story has the potential to become something big if that sole problem gets solved. Has good grammar, a great idea behind the world-building, and the MC is likable! Don't give up, author! We learn from our mistakes after all. Have a nice writing and may your novel prosper! ;)