The writing style is fine and the story seems to have a strong backbone (plot ). The evil ML and weak FL that is under his shoe is a popular think , but I hope the author will give it some sparkle with some twists or unique genres mixed ...whatever the author wants but please put something crazy in there ..hahaha...The story has potential ! Keep up !
yankee825
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