Review Detail of Dxr_Xrd in Unleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel Universe

Item: Unleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel Universe
Rating: 4

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Dxr_XrdLv26mthDxr_Xrd

Well written with very negligible grammatical errors. The plot is good. Updates are stable. Story development sometimes staggers, but it's ok. Keep up the good work.

Unleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel Universe

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Liked it!

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ThinkersLv1Thinkers

Chinese fictions ka copy he madarchod..lauda janta he tu..ja mtl me ye story he adha .. madarchod ka bacha kuch janta he kya tu..sala kitna I'd he tera

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Abe chutya, tere asli baap lagta hai chinese hai, bhikari ke alut.

Thinkers:Chinese fictions ka copy he madarchod..lauda janta he tu..ja mtl me ye story he adha .. madarchod ka bacha kuch janta he kya tu..sala kitna I'd he tera

2mth

ThinkersLv1Thinkers

Teri Randi maa apni chut fad di bhikari se chod khati he...tu madarchod ka bacha tatti khake peda hua he..Teri Gand fad dunga samne Mila toh...Teri Gand me ek hulk ghusa dunga...tatti v Teri band ho jaegi gandi nali ka kida .sala sadap cha bhikari tatti khane wala bhikari

Dxr_Xrd:Abe chutya, tere asli baap lagta hai chinese hai, bhikari ke alut.

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