Good story, the first chapter really hooked me in and made me add the book immediately but, I think the author should change the way he introduces characters and their backstory. As there are still little chapters, and the author presents the characters by doings POVs about their whole life it looks like the MC is not present or unimportant to the story.
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SUKAAlso, when she talks with the system, there are a lot of times where she asks questions that already been said (I marked them in the chapters) (Ex.: "By doing missions you can get points that can be used to purchase things from the shop." and then she asks "What are the points for?", this is just an example I don't remember if it was this exact sentence) and also makes really dumb questions like "What is a novice gift pack?",wich is obvius just for the name, and to prove this, the response she got was "It is a gift pack that we give to novices."