Review Detail of victoriarogue in Death of the Flame Fist

This was originally meant to be a short story about an original character and Portgas D. Ace. It's by no means a perfect piece of fiction as it does have flaws in referencing canon characters and events, but this story was meant to include the world and responsibilities of the privateers, which was a group of pirates that served their respective countries in the navy and legally were able to perform acts of piracy as long as they had what Oda calls the Enemy Ship Capture Warrant. This document was originally known as the Letter of Marque, and I believe Oda was using the Seven Warlords of the Sea as a reference to the privateers. There are similarities, but I found it odd how Oda handled the privateers, especially Jean Lafitte, so I took on this particular project to explain how unique these people actually were. Obviously, this is also One Piece - the slap-em-up shounen anime - so we have to give the privateers either Devil Fruit powers or some kind of unique set of abilities. I do that largely during the political portions of this story. Unfortunately, I refrained from including those bits here because of the lack of feedback, but this story has grown elsewhere so I will start rewriting fuller episodes in the future. I just wanted to be upfront and honest about what you're getting in to. The first three to four chapters are politically involved in part, but it gets less and less politically active after that. The bonus chapters have a bit more, but it's not ground-breaking. I think you'll still be able to enjoy it regardless, but I wanted to at least warn you that it's not revolutionary. It's more or less "cute".